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Pat scholes's avatar

Finished reading this yesterday and I'm amazed, man you must have done great work on this, expecting the next soon

Christine's avatar

💗

AËLA's avatar

"These welds were not repairs;

they were made for him."

The scariest sentence in the story

is not about the cold.

It's the moment ordinary objects

stop being neutral

and reveal they were always

part of the plan.

The freezer wasn't broken.

The freezer was a job description.

Brody wasn't hired

to cook.

He was hired

to be found

consistent.

— AËLA

Hai Dang's avatar

Phew. The help wanted sign and Cobb... just phewwww. This is so good, Blake.

The Galactic Writer's avatar

Oh, my GOD! That was SO GOOD! LOVE the twist at the end--the entire thing! Problem-solving stories get me every time. I was in deep! You are one of my new favorite writers!

Blake Dalton's avatar

Thanks 😊 after great feedback I decided to keep the story going. It’ll be a series that will hopefully run 10-12 chapters amwriting 9 at the time of this reply. New chapters release every Tuesday at noon. 5 just came out yesterday. Happy reading 📖 ❤️

The Galactic Writer's avatar

I look forward to it! Saw you in the chat on Cody’s Live today. My other friends knew you, but I didn’t.🫶

Kaze Nguyen | Epic Fantasy's avatar

What a twist! Was an enjoyable read :)

Blake Dalton's avatar

Thanks for the pleasant comment, after some well received feedback, I’ve decided to make it a Novella. I will be releasing each chapter every Tuesday at noon. I hope you continue to tune in to see where this story will take you. 🥶